Monday, August 17, 2009

Smiles in a fade

Every time I die
I see her fade away
Every time I fade away
I see her cry
Every time I cry
I hear her say good bye
Every time I say good bye
I see her die
Every time I die
I see her smile


1 comment:

  1. This poem has great rythm and flows well but it lacks reason. It simply does not move me. sorry!

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